[calle]

Hi. I have written a scene  for a novel. In this scene, characters discuss bio-engineering - specifically designer humans and how they will be developed. Processes such as cloning are included. I would appreciate any help verifying how realistic the explanations I provide the reader with are. I welcome any suggestions on how to improve this part of the book. 

If you would like to proof-read the text, please let me know. I promise to include your name (if you like) in the dedication and hopefully a copy of the book.

Thanks. Look forward to getting expert eyes on the text.